Yesterday, Today, and Tomorrow..
The day is still in the run of the mill..
Through the life in IPTI,
Dull, stiff, lot of preassure..
I wonder if I can change this situation.
But I am only a tiny part of there.
Nothing can do by me.
I never care,
As long I can still live in happy..
Make my friend happier than me.
When I can do my best,
then IPTI would be the best place for me..
* this poem was created with the unstable mood.. the writer still in the path of learning how to create a good poem.. Sorry for the not too good poem.. Promise to do better after this..
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ko da wat ea nurul..
ur poem is ok deqyah but be aware for some grammar errors !
only a tiny part of it..
nothing can be done...
I don't care
As long I can live happily..
p/s ada bakat terpendam ni... hehe !!!
one more deqyah..
pressure.. nt preassure
then poem ni patut ada rima die...
aabb
i dont want to comment but this is called peer-check.. hehe !
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dear arvind: thank u yuva!! im really bad in writing a flowerish poem.. grammar,spelling error..haish...terrible..could u plz create one beautiful poem for me...huhu..plz....
dear saat sulaiman: boleh saja..tp utk apa ye maklumat 2 diambil?
dear saat sulaiman:ooo..ok..skrg sy dah faham 2k apa maklumat 2..tapi maklumat yg mcm mn awak nk yek?
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